aaron
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Post by aaron on May 10, 2019 18:22:41 GMT
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May 10, 2019 18:55:06 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 10, 2019 18:55:06 GMT
I see your point. I wasn't trying to channel Pessoa or anything, it just kind of flowed naturally from the conversation we were having and the things I was contemplating.
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May 10, 2019 19:10:31 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 10, 2019 19:10:31 GMT
I write a poem probably every day, and most of them are inspired by a quick thought or a moment and then I put it into verse. The other day it was this one, inspired by the fact that it has rained almost non-stop in Massachusetts for several weeks. When we finally got some respite, there he was again, bringing another rainstorm! I say to people that Toranos has been courting me, and that's why he's been around so much.
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aaron
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Post by aaron on May 10, 2019 22:19:38 GMT
I see your point. I wasn't trying to channel Pessoa or anything, it just kind of flowed naturally from the conversation we were having and the things I was contemplating. Yeah, I didn't mean to suggest conscious intent. I just love love LOVE Pessoa, so I wanted the chance to rep his stuff.
I like both your latest two.
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May 10, 2019 23:00:07 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 10, 2019 23:00:07 GMT
I am always extremely flattered to be compared to anyone good, so I did not mean it that way. Thank you! :-)
I keep reading your newly-published poem and it really takes me back to a similar experience. Very evocative. I shall tell you the story sometime.
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aaron
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May 10, 2019 23:26:35 GMT
Post by aaron on May 10, 2019 23:26:35 GMT
: ) Thanks, I'm glad it's moving you.
Have you read Pessoa's "Maritime Ode"?
I need to re-read that; unfortunately my copy's in Pittsburgh...
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May 11, 2019 2:43:12 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 11, 2019 2:43:12 GMT
I don't think I have. Was that one of his English language poems?
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aaron
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Post by aaron on May 11, 2019 11:37:03 GMT
No (those ones aren't very good, imo). But Richard Zenith has given us top-notch translations of lots of the poetry. The Maritime Ode is a long, sprawling, Whitmanian-but-melancholy reverie. About 30 pages, I think, and absolutely stunning.
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May 11, 2019 14:01:11 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 11, 2019 14:01:11 GMT
I'm very much interested in writing more narrative poetry. At the moment I've been working on novel-like narratives or romances (to use a much older term, not to be confused with a "romance novel" of course) with the Mabinogion as my primary inspiration. They are supplements of the Konsmogeniā, some additional sagas, all of them longer than a standard novella but on the short side for a novel (200 pages or less). However, I would love to take the time to make long narrative poetry (inspired by Edmund Spenser) of equal length. I just find it very exhausting to write even 40 lines of poetry, never mind thousands, so it will probably take a long time to finish something like that.
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aaron
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May 11, 2019 14:45:54 GMT
Post by aaron on May 11, 2019 14:45:54 GMT
Yeah, it can be agonizingly slow. I think I'm slower than you are... takes me multiple days to complete most poems I try to write. The longest I've written is 66 lines, though I'm in the middle of one that will end up being probably 250-300. Been in the middle of that one since 2017...
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May 11, 2019 15:18:45 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 11, 2019 15:18:45 GMT
I definitely need to adjust my process. My earliest poetic inspiration were dainas, and then unsurprisingly I picked up quickly on other short-form poems like Welsh triads and Japanese haiku, and then I was inspired further by the Welsh practice of "awenyddiaeth" or poetic inspiration. So my compositional process for poetry has always been to write something brief and succinct when the inspiration strikes me. Writing longer poems, I feel like I'm instead tapping into my narrative compositional attitudes, so I think that's why it will be past to explore narrative poems when to work out long-form approaches to composition. The poem I posted in the previous page at 72 lines was one of my earliest attempts at that. However, I still compose dainas and other brief poems all the time because now I'm just conditioned to do that when the mood strikes me. I almost feel with those that they're just me expressing myself more than trying to create artworks, but that's also in line with my folksy style, so I think it suits me.
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May 13, 2019 13:54:58 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 13, 2019 13:54:58 GMT
Here's three small Welsh poems are wrote using Welsh rhyming and harmony rules. They are all only three lines, but surprisingly difficult to write because of the sound rules.
mae'r cryndod gannwyll golau yn y gwyll dwi'n grynu hefyd yn y tywyll
[the candle flickers a light in twilight i, too, tremble in the dark]
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glaw oer yn disgyn coffa y gwanwyn yn gyntaf, rhew gwyn
[cold rain falling a remembrance of spring but first, a white frost]
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mae'r haul yn cysgu dal ond mae'r oer dyfal mae yn ynghwsg arial
[the sun still sleeps but the cold is unremitting dormant is the spirit]
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aaron
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Post by aaron on May 14, 2019 0:55:20 GMT
Those are really nice, especially the first. (I can only appreciate the English, of course.)
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May 14, 2019 1:11:29 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 14, 2019 1:11:29 GMT
Thank you, Aaron. <3
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May 14, 2019 10:40:05 GMT
Post by Mātōnya on May 14, 2019 10:40:05 GMT
I got some inspiration this morning after making breakfast and drinking coffee and came up with this when I looked out my office window and saw that the oak trees still have no leaves.
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